Dear me…this is beautiful – there is a feeling of time, of being trapped, of easily broken, all with the icicles. I think there are some very special haiku in this blog.And to come.
yes i think icicles are cool and all but they’re fragile, cold, fatal and to me, their shape symbolizes “painfully slow” like you’re waiting for the water to drop, but it’s not
The Eclectic Eccentric 
Tragic haiku … excellent take on the prompt though.
🙂
thank you 🙂
You have written a sad story on our prompt icicles, but the deeper meaning I can feel. Thank you for sharing.
thanks it seems as though most of my haiku are sad lol ^^
Dear me…this is beautiful – there is a feeling of time, of being trapped, of easily broken, all with the icicles. I think there are some very special haiku in this blog.And to come.
yes i think icicles are cool and all but they’re fragile, cold, fatal and to me, their shape symbolizes “painfully slow” like you’re waiting for the water to drop, but it’s not
yes..that “time” element…fatal, fragile..I saw it just as you say..
Slow and painful this is not….delightful it is. Thank you 🙂
thank you 🙂
Drip, drip, drip…
Icicles
There’s nothing worse than a slow and painful good-bye!
Seeking Icicles
a bit sad, but so well written…..thanx for sharing