Copyright – Douglas M MacIlroy
WARNING: language and content may be unpleasant
CONTAMINATED CONCEPTION
She comes home every morning, limping, reeking of sex and decay.
She makes coffee, sits across from me.
We don’t talk about it. Even as gray alien semen dribble down her thighs.
Every night, our women steal from our beds, like moths mesmerized by the phallic tower and its glaring sex light.
I try to ignore the abomination housed in her contaminated womb.
She carries it proudly… like she’s the virgin fucking Mary.
It’s time.
She’s bound to the bed.
I point my rifle at the screaming hole between her thighs and wait for the bastard’s head to come out.
PS because I suck at making story titles, feel free to suggest one. ^^ i hope your Christmas celebration rocked. xo 🙂
The Eclectic Eccentric 
A brilliantly gritty, 21st century take on The Midwich Cuckoos. Loved it.
just Googled The Midwich Cuckoos… ooh it sounds interesting. i think I’ll read the novel/ watch the film. thanks a lot 🙂
Definitely worth a look, though if you go for the film, I’d recommend the older version over the newer one with Kirstie Alley. They’re both okay, but the alien kids are much creepier in black and white.
that’s great. i love black and white films! 🙂
I think that’s a good title for it. You contained the whole gritty, sordid scenario into a small area. I like the sci-fi aspect to it, kind of a cross between H.P. Lovecraft and the Astronaut’s Wife.
I loved that. A break from the norm for you and it was fantastic
thanks Al.have an awesome 2014 🙂
I hope you do too KZ
Fantastic imagination.
holy crap. That was disgusting and excellent.
lol thank you 🙂
Yes… as you put it… “unpleasant”… which is what makes it so absorbing!
thank you 🙂
Very graphic, but I must say, I’m intrigued. This would make a fantastic longer story. You should expand on this.
thank you Russel. hmm yes, i’ll definitely turn this one into a longer story. it’d be fun to see where it goes 🙂
Wow. I agree with Russell, this could be expanded.
Holy crap! I wasn’t expecting that even after your warning 🙂
That was very good indeed. I reckon it would make a great film. I especially loved “moths mesmerized by the phallic tower and its glaring sex light”.
What a story.. you have a black mind to come up with these stories… This could be a whole novel.. and what a way for alien to conquer our earth.
What a desperate existence you paint. It’s not often you read a story and feel grimey afterwards. Great stuff, kz.
Oh, aliens have made an appearance. Yes, this was gritty and disturbing. Very effective, kz. Excellent.
A disturbingly graphic story kz. I agree it would make a powerful longer piece, though I’m not sure I’d enjoy reading it. 😉
oh my goodness… this is creepy and disturbing for sure…very well written…
thank you 🙂
That’s a real shocker. You must have been in a strange mood to write it. I think it’s very brave. Well done.
Now that was different. Very good writing. Graphic just like life is. Good job kz!
scary stuff. i agree with the others. this could be expanded into a short story or novel.
It’s true this deserves enlarging on. Excellent story, graphic and gripping. 🙂
Wow, what is happening to you, kz? Have you found a good therapist yet/
yep. the guy’s last name is Block, i think.
Woh! That is even more explicit than I expected. I imagine someone in the narrator’s position doing this, feeling their women had been defiled. So intense fraught with powerful emotion. Awesome, kz!
Whoa. Just whoa. You amaze me. On so many levels. This will stay with me for sure…
Dear KZ,
Contaminated Conception. I couldn’t have come up with a better title. Disturbing…but you wrote it well.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Dear Kz,
Been reading anime comics again? I love that there were no half measures in your writing. You pulled no punches and unflinchingly told the story. Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
A fascinating read! Why stop at a short story or novel, when this would fare awesomely on the big screen. Here I am picturing a great plot turned into a B movie or porn flick..
Wow, gritty and ace 🙂
Ah, a story I can really enjoy! 🙂
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/12/26/ff-friday-fictioneers-carolyn-leaves-reality-rated-r-12272013/
wow. That’s pretty strong. I like your stuff.
http://www.awordofsubstance.wordpress.com
thank you. i appreciate it 🙂