Contaminated Conception

Copyright – Douglas M MacIlroy

Copyright – Douglas M MacIlroy

WARNING: language and content may be unpleasant

CONTAMINATED CONCEPTION

She comes home every morning, limping, reeking of sex and decay.

She makes coffee, sits across from me.

We don’t talk about it. Even as gray alien semen dribble down her thighs.

Every night, our women steal from our beds, like moths mesmerized by the phallic tower and its glaring sex light.

I try to ignore the abomination housed in her contaminated womb.

She carries it proudly… like she’s the virgin fucking Mary.

It’s time.

She’s bound to the bed.

I point my rifle at the screaming hole between her thighs and wait for the bastard’s head to come out.

PS because I suck at making story titles, feel free to suggest one. ^^ i hope your Christmas celebration rocked. xo 🙂

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38 thoughts on “Contaminated Conception

  1. I think that’s a good title for it. You contained the whole gritty, sordid scenario into a small area. I like the sci-fi aspect to it, kind of a cross between H.P. Lovecraft and the Astronaut’s Wife.

  2. Holy crap! I wasn’t expecting that even after your warning 🙂
    That was very good indeed. I reckon it would make a great film. I especially loved “moths mesmerized by the phallic tower and its glaring sex light”.

  3. Woh! That is even more explicit than I expected. I imagine someone in the narrator’s position doing this, feeling their women had been defiled. So intense fraught with powerful emotion. Awesome, kz!

  4. Dear Kz,

    Been reading anime comics again? I love that there were no half measures in your writing. You pulled no punches and unflinchingly told the story. Well done.

    Aloha,

    Doug

  5. A fascinating read! Why stop at a short story or novel, when this would fare awesomely on the big screen. Here I am picturing a great plot turned into a B movie or porn flick..

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