Copyright – Rich Voza
Hell Hath No Fury
He said he wanted to build a home with me…
…eventually.
So I held onto that promise for years.
Slowly, patiently, we built a lovely home… one brick at a time.
Then just like that, the bitch-wolf came and blew it down.
If there’s something I learned from nursery tales it’s that when someone does something like that, you don’t let it pass.
You take them to the chimney to burn.
I stood at their ceremony, sniffing, clad in black.
Chimneys are crap so I just shot them down.
I sincerely wish them happiness in their new subterranean home.
© 2013 K.Z. Morano
The Eclectic Eccentric 
Glad to see you’re keeping your hand in at a little story telling, even though you’re busy with school (?)
Your usual excellent dark tale.
yup 🙂 somehow, i can’t stay away from Friday Fictioneers 🙂 i look forward to it every week lol ^^ thank you
They got what was coming to them! Good one!
haha, thanks 🙂
🙂 They definitely had it coming, and you did it with style!
lol yup, i guess they did. thank you ^^
I loved the bitch wolf tag, great job 🙂
Perfectly venomous! Wonderful.
Vengeance is such a powerful image. Well done, no bitch wolf should survive.
Dear KZ,
They say that revenge is a dish served best cold. In this case, red hot or “well done”. tee hee.
Note: onto…one word
Shalom,
Rochelle
thank you 🙂
Dear Kz,
Remind me never to anger you. Great story.
Aloha,
Doug
Perfect title. Let’s all consider this a cautionary tale. 🙂
Wow, that was dark, and delicious. A very tastey little morsel if I do say so myself. All the best to the newly deceased.
This has me imagining life in a nursery rhyme; I am scared and excited.
Ooh, “Hell hath no fury…” Love this. The way the protagonist thinks is fascinating. I can’t help but root for her.
What a wild, cool way you manage to bring in Three Little Pigs and some revenge like out of Grimm’s Fairy Tales. That’s some serious revenge!
Nobody can do this like you can kz, nobody.
Whoa, note to self–don’t cross kz. The title pretty much says it all.
P.S. – I loved the nursery rhyme part too.
We have our claws out this week, do we? lol
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/09/25/friday-fictioneers-door-number-two-horror-pg13-92713/
I just love this kz! It’s always a treat when I get to your stories! You have a deliciously dangerous take on the prompts that I always enjoy!
A nice tale here, steep in suspense and very thrilling! 🙂
Good one! 😉
The bitch-wolf, that really stung! Dark tale, kz. I enjoyed it!
Ha. love the first perspective on this … you are really dangerous in these prompts…
Very devilish of you for this weeks story. Taken from the innocent doors then plumbing the depths of revenge.
No shower of rice, only bullets. You really did them in this week.