i wanted to go with this one…
those honeyed whispers
in the most vital moments
trickle in my ear
恵
but the second one more genuinely reflects my thoughts
despicable acts
deliberately performed
need someone to blame
恵
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The Eclectic Eccentric 
Well balanced in thoughts, kz! Beautiful word choice!
Hank
thank you 🙂
I like the first one. I’m not sure where those whispering bad spirits’ voices come from, but we all hear them at times! 🙂 The Fall
they probably come from the subconscious… just maybe.. ^^
You are so smart!
🙂 thank you
honeyed whispers … I would love that 😀
HaHa, I think we may have an accord there KZ 😉
I’m glad you went with both
LOVE the first one.
Cheers!
JzB
I got stuck on “honeyed whispers.” Love that!
Ah, but the first one can’t be bad… the second is more to my thoughts (but I liked the first haiku better)
The first does sound better, but I like them both 🙂
I like both and very true
both of then good; the first one really deep:)