Carpe Diem: Daily Haiku 95 April 18, 2013 by K.Z. 13 Stillness echoes through the walls of her empty womb muted threnody 恵 Share this:TwitterEmailFacebookTumblrPinterestLike this:Like Loading... Related
Stunningly sad. Amazing words to express your haiku. Am hoping it is not a personal experience. And please accept my virtual hugs if it is. Reply
you found a way
to magnify the sadness
JzB
Wow this is so poignant. Well done, poet, well done!!
Oh, kz… Beyond sad…
Empathy is a wonderful writer’s tool…..!
thanks so much, carolyn ^^
Stunningly sad. Amazing words to express your haiku. Am hoping it is not a personal experience. And please accept my virtual hugs if it is.
thank you ^^ not from personal experience, thank goodness… 🙂
I’ve just felt how sadness must feel.
A muted threnody = stifled emotions, I think.
Threnody of Dust
you got it, which is wonderful. thanks ^^
You, like no other, can reach the reader in his or her gut.
This touches the soul … well expressed !!!
This hurts — very good. I read these poems of yeasterday with tears in my eyes.
Wow, have I told you that you have your way with words, KZ? Powerful.