Inspiration Haiku by Onitsura:
tani-mizu ya ishi mo utayomu yama-zakura
the wild cherry:
stones also are singing their songs
in the valley stream
From the stones’ cool throat
Spring ballads composed by the
Stream’s velvet coaxing
恵
Wistful ballads pass
Between stones and spring blossoms
Long distance affair
恵
Stream stones cantillate
A sweet muffled serenade
For those who listen
恵
I can hear the babbling of the water as I read your words; fantastic.
thank you for the visit 🙂
These are beautiful!
thank you 🙂
Stream stones cantillate – great line and a new word to me. Thank you KZ 🙂
cantillate is new to me too
these are wonderful
the 2nd made me smile
Cheers!
JzB
Love the river.. I can imagine my feet inside it.. very cool.. feeling the breeze.. oh so peaceful.. and the time stops…
thank you 🙂
Absolutely brilliant, cantillate – what does it mean!
My heart goes to that long distance affair.
I am eager to listen to the song !!!
some wonderful lines there, and as a whole – 2nd and 3rd really nice.
well done..all of them
[…] Stream stones cantillate
A sweet muffled serenade
For those who listen […]
A masterpiece KZ. Thank you for your daily effort to write and share your haiku with Carpe Diem.
and thank you for your daily efforts in hosting Carpe Diem.. the themes this month are extra wonderful ^^
“long distance affair”
I could take that image and run with it, or do other things with it… 🙂
Singing Stone
🙂
very inspired set…love the word ‘cantillate’ (had to look it up!), and the ‘stream’s velvet coaxing’….always the unexpected here…
Oh my! These are wonderful! Thank you for ‘cantillate.’ 🙂
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beautifully done, KZ!
Stream stones cantillate
A sweet muffled serenade
For those who listen
Oh, but once in the Swedish Mountains we were tenting next to a stream when it started to rain. As the water started to rise big rocks started to tumble… More like thunder actually 🙂
hahaha a heavy metal concert it was then
🙂 or at least a Mahler symphony
^^
aloha KZ – i like the word combination of “stream stones”. it brings up clear images. very cool. aloha.