Quick! think of a snow haiku ^^ lol I’m not really in the mood.. Just so you know, I don’t have snow ^^ It’s SWELTERING and I’m having ice cream right now. Yumm ^^
Tipping my small ice cream cup
For that last cool drop.
Frozen blanket pulled
From the earth’s sleepy surface
Flowers rub their eyes.
Very nice KZ. It’s hard writing about snow when you don’t have it, but you’ve cracked it 🙂
well i can always get yummy tasting snow in a cup ^^
So I see.yum yum 😉
Oh poor you… no snow.. here it’s still snow on the ground so it felt weird writing about the end of snow for me.
hehe 🙂 i think i was designed for warm weather.
Oh! Icecream! Nice! 🙂
aloha KZ. i like the first one here as it brings a sense of enjoying the last snow. i like that. i also like that this ku employs what i’d call fragment and phrase thinking. i like that a lot. aloha.
Love the flower line …
thank you 🙂
Tipping one’s cup is never a bad thing! 🙂
The second one is wonderful
Looks and sounds yummy!
That looks so good!
I love the image of the blanket pulled from the sleeping spring in your second poem! 🙂
I need an ice-cream now !!!
what a delicious comparison!