Quick! think of a snow haiku ^^ lol I’m not really in the mood.. Just so you know, I don’t have snow ^^ It’s SWELTERING and I’m having ice cream right now. Yumm ^^
Melted caramel
Tipping my small ice cream cup
For that last cool drop.
恵
Frozen blanket pulled
From the earth’s sleepy surface
Flowers rub their eyes.
恵
Very nice KZ. It’s hard writing about snow when you don’t have it, but you’ve cracked it 🙂
well i can always get yummy tasting snow in a cup ^^
So I see.yum yum 😉
Oh poor you… no snow.. here it’s still snow on the ground so it felt weird writing about the end of snow for me.
hehe 🙂 i think i was designed for warm weather.
Oh! Icecream! Nice! 🙂
aloha KZ. i like the first one here as it brings a sense of enjoying the last snow. i like that. i also like that this ku employs what i’d call fragment and phrase thinking. i like that a lot. aloha.
Love the flower line …
thank you 🙂
Tipping one’s cup is never a bad thing! 🙂
Last Snowflake
The second one is wonderful
Cheers!
JzB
Looks and sounds yummy!
That looks so good!
I love the image of the blanket pulled from the sleeping spring in your second poem! 🙂
I need an ice-cream now !!!
what a delicious comparison!