Hilde raised an eyebrow at Esme, two sugar cubes suspended in the air, hovering above her cup of tea.
“So, that was it then, he met you in town then fell in love?”
“Well,” Esme purred, studying her fingernails, her teaspoon twirling around the vermilion liquid on its own, “I did doctor his wine a little bit…”
The blocks of sugar exploded into crystal smithereens, bespeckling the immaculate table.
“You what?!” , the lights in the tea room flickered off and on.
“Oh come now, you can tell that he liked me! He just needed a little…encouragement.”, the teaspoon halted.
“I saw him first!”, Hilde screeched, the pot of tea flew, its warm contents spilling all over Esme’s face.
Esme gasped, too stunned to speak, the bittersweet brew creating a crimson stain on the front of her frilly dress. She retaliated by hurling a ball of fire at Hilde’s head. Hilde ran frantically about the room screaming as her ridiculously high pile of golden-blonde tresses were wrapped in incandescent flames. She paused, snapped her fingers and created a cloudburst to quench the fire.
The two women stared murderously at each other, wet hair plastered about their glowering faces, clothes drenched in rainwater.
“A rain shower!? Inside the house, Hilde!?,” Esme shrieked, her bright green gaze as cold and hard as splintered glass.
It was at that moment that Swanson came in and announced, “A Mr. Lingley for Ms. Elkins.” Then curtly left the room, wise enough to pretend that he saw nothing uncommon.
Hilde gathered her billowy skirts and started off but Esme yanked her arm and hissed, “He meant me.”
She began to move past Hilde’s sodden figure then hesitated, “I’ m a horrible mess!” she sobbed.
“Hush my love.. It doesn’t matter..”, Hilde embraced her sister and whispered soothingly, “I’m sure your spell worked. Truthfully, you may not even have need for doctor.”
Esme gave Hilde a dazzling smile, kissed her cheek fondly and went off to greet her Mr. Lingley.
333 words
DOCTOR (noun)
a : material added (as to food) to produce a desired effect
Feuding witches! I love this idea. (:
haha thanks. trifecta has a way of pushing one to come up with an idea. i wonder if the trifecta people ever run out of things to write about.. seriously, how do you do it?! lol ^^
Loved the setup, the spells, and especially the finale!
thank you ^^ glad you liked the crazy sisters
It was like pride and prejudice meets harry potter. Love it!
haha Mr. Bingley, Mr. Lingley. lol ^^ thank you
‘at that moment Swanson came in’… I love it!
thank you ^^ i like the name Swanson 🙂
Ah, sisterly rivalry like this makes me thankful I don’t have a sister. (Although, it is more interesting with spells :))
me too 🙂 surprisingly, i never found myself wishing for a sister ^^ lol thanks
Sibling rivalry is a horrible thing. Well written!
thankfully i’d never know this kind of sister rivalry haha thanks ^^
kz your imagination is wild and wonderful and slightly crazy – but I love it!
thank you 🙂
I like the butler’s indifference, Good wry humor there.
thanks 🙂
What an imagination you have..Nothing like a little sibling jealously.. Well done..
thank you ^^
Silbing rivalry unchained! Made me think of Death Becomes Her. Funny piece.
loved that movie too. thanks ^^
This was a really fun read. Your descriptions were wonderful, I could see the whole scene playing out in great detail.
thank you 🙂
What a couple of witches. 😉 Wonderful imagery and descriptions. A fun story!
thanks 🙂
Typical story of sibling rivalry. Ha! I enjoyed this. I’ll be sure not to mess with either of these ladies.
thanks ^^
loved this . . . and, ding, ding, ding . . . use of doctor as both noun AND verb? Well done!
thank you 🙂
Fun story! I love the fighting witches.
thank you 🙂
This was a lot of fun. I have 5 sisters and we fought quite a bit when we were young. Had we the power to cast spells and incantations we would have done so. We never fought over boys, but just about everything else. I could see it all – so well described..
5 sisters who can cast spells tks3 sounds like trouble.lol thanks ^^
This is so much fun. “A rain shower!? Inside the house, Hilde!?” – great images. I really enjoyed it.
thank you 🙂
This gives a whole knew meaning to ‘cat fight’; I love it, very imaginative.
thanks 🙂
Hilarious, Kz!Just loved this witchy-a bit bitchy tale ;-)Wonder if Mr.Lingley is ready for such “doctoring”,lol!
thank you 🙂