Carpe Diem: Daily Haiku 54

sakura

Spirits set ablaze
By the taiko’s roaring beats
Brave soldiers march forth.

Warrior’s battle cry
From the village, faintly heard
Drumbeats escalate.

In the battlefield
Above thunderous pounding
Sound of steel clashing.

Sensual drumbeats
Sultry goddess stomps her feet
Curves undulating.

Today’s prompt: Taiko

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19 thoughts on “Carpe Diem: Daily Haiku 54

  1. Awesome drum beats. I enjoyed the middle’s escalating intensity. I can hear the drum beats and feel the fear of the distant war machine approaching.

    • haha thank you.. for the kind words.. and hey, i followed your advice on writing a story that exceeds 1000 words… ^^ well i followed it except for the working on it over a few days part — i settled with hours instead lol but when i find time, i’ll write something great i swear… i just had to tell you it felt so good to write a longer story!!! so thank you..

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