i’ll prolly be killed for this but here’s the story
so he packed his bags
to leave town for awhile
to erase the memory of her face
with the sea and alcohol
so he surfed all day
partied all night
but what they don’t know of
is that brief moment in between
when the sun sets
and everything falls quiet
all he could think about
was how it would’ve been perfect
if only she was there.
-post breakup
challenge from this great blog
Oh that was beautiful – Really powerful, and not full of silly tears, just that reflection…
thank you:)
“i’ll prolly be killed for this but here’s the story”: it always takes some courage to write …
I loved that!!! Well done girl 🙂
thank you 🙂
Great stuff!
thank you 🙂
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