…I stood transfixed, momentarily blinded by his beauty. His eyes were magnificent orbs of ebony flecked with sunlight… his hair, spun by angels as they sang exultant hymns on his moment of birth…
*wasn’t really planning on writing but here i thought of my lovely godson and got all sentimental. if i ever have a baby… oh, i sure hope there can be two of him! ^^
33 words of hyperbole
Sweetly beautiful!
thank you
Babies are such miraculous creatures. You captured that feeling perfectly!
they sure are <3 thanks ^^
He sounds like such a cutie :3
oh he’s the cutest!! — that’s not a hyperbole lol thanks ^^
Glad the blinding was literary!! Sweet.
me too! hahaha thanks
Aww,so cute,loved it!
thank you ^^
Very cool, K!
thanks, Ted ^^
I lovely writing. Nice sentiment too!
thank you ^^
I think you nailed hyperbole.
he’s such a sweet kid sometimes i don’t think i’m exaggerating!
thank you
thank you
That is just beautiful!
Lovely!
thanks, Joe ^^
Very tender moment.