Heated arguments
Fueled by embers of lust
Fighting’s just foreplay.
恵
Two old lovers meet
Underneath the pleasantries,
The embers still live.
恵
Life falls in pattern
Their eyes — exhausted embers
Beyond renewal.
恵
Embers of desire
Oh that maddening first touch
Our bodies on fire.
恵
I made three coz I wanted to capture three four different stages of relationships ^^ Hopefully you’re in the first.and last. (oh i rather like the first)
lol
Word for today: Embers
Wow you covered many possibilities! I hope there are other ways to fuel the fires besides fighting though!
hahaha i’m quite sure there are ^^ thanks
I stop writing haiku when i totally failed becoming a poet, a novelist. Hahahaha! But you are a great one who keeps on writing haiku. I like it! I think i should try to write one. Hmmmm….!
what,no way! KEEP WRITING! each person has his/her own unique style.. i have never thought i’d love writing haiku and fiction up until i started this blog around 3-4 months ago.. i think the daily practice helps
The second is my favorite!
Embers
thank you
Long may a breeze fan your flame of creativity. Thank you
awww such sweet words.. thank you!
A beautiful take on phases of relationship … well penned
thank you
There is always such passion in your words.
The second one is a slice out of my life.
Thursday will be our 22nd anniversary.
Cheers!
JzB
awww really? i’m so happy to hear that! hopeless romantic that i am. oh i wish you guys a happy anniversary! ^^
Smouldering love – each haiku has its two meanings…undertones…good and not so good ..fine art kz..
thanks so much — and for getting me started on haiku ^^
A well balanced series of haiku on each stage of a relationship. Really awesome. I am glad that you have started writing haiku … and it’s true … daily practice will help to grow. But the most important thing is feel free to write, don’t hold on to the rules of haiku … write them right from the heart and they will become stronger … Thank you for sharing on Carpe Diem every day.
Namaste
thank you very much for those words
There definitely is fire in those ones. And a nice flow. Wonderful, kz!
thank you
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awwww thanks so much
My first thought was ‘ah, to be young again’……I loved the romance and hot love….
yes.. nothing quite like hot love and romance ^^ haha thanks or droppin by
I love hove you associate the ember with love and passion, only a little air is needed and the emer’s on fire.
thanks for coming up with this theme ^^ it’s an awesome subject and ember’s such a pretty word ^^